Question by 🙂: my personal statement???
if you could please please please take the time to read my personal statement i would greatly appreciate your advice! I know it sucks, but it is all i could think of for now 🙁
There is a room. To any ordinary person, they may see an empty, six-sided, plain, white room. What if there were twelve sides instead of six? Perhaps the wall are made out of chocolate? Better yet, what if the walls are not walls, but wide, stretched, mouths of hungry monsters? This comes to mind when I think of a room, many thoughts rise to the surface. Imagination and creativity are things I cherish and they enable me to step outside the world of reality and into the a realm of possibilities. Other than my personal qualities, Films too have encouraged me to follow my hopes and dreams. Most importantly, greatest inspiration of all comes from my family, who provide endless support in what ever I do and the decisions I make. Due to this qualities, I have been able to follow my dreams, and aspirations in the visual arts.
I love films. Weather it be action, drama, romantic or comedy, I fancy them all. I have come to pursue my desire to become a film director. I possess the inimitable imagination and pleasurable creativity to become a successful film director. However, this career path not only requires great imagination and creativity, but the patience and effort to produce a finished film. Since I had the opportunity to experience the rigorous work of Advance Placement and honors classes, I have acquired the patience and effort I need to pursue a career in film. Taking various courses such as art, video production, and creative writing, have done nothing but benefit me towards my ambitious goals. Other than classes that have helped me, I personally write my own
screenplays for my enjoyment. There is one I wrote about which involves a married math professor in his thirties, who has a spicy love affair with one of his young intelligent college student. In the midst of it all, his wife becomes very ill with muscular dystrophy atrophy and he must quickly decided weather he loves his wife or his new lover. With these valuable attributes, I believe they will set me on the right path to obtain a career in the visual arts.
What really inspired me to pursue an occupation in the filed of visual arts? My inspiration came from none other than a film. Not just any film, but a truly mesmerizing motion picture of paranoia, pressure, and of coarse doubt. When I was saw the independent film, Doubt, I could not help but notice the vast array of symbolism, allusion, and incredible tension between the interactions the characters shared with each other. After watching this film, I knew I will put forth all my efforts to become a film director. I can honestly say, this film had awakened me from a sleep in which I was indecisive of my profession.
Above all else, my family has provided me with their love and support in my choice of study. As my grandmother always says, “Hechale Ganas!” Which means, “give it your all!” which I certainly will. With my family, discussing education is always positive. They have never discouraged me to excel in school. My mother and father have always told me they do not mind what type of career I choose as long as I am happy. This definitely makes me rest at ease, knowing that my family is always close behind me. In result of this, my family has been my true motivation to achieve my goals and go forth with my profession.
So what makes me unique? What makes me stand out from the thousands of students across the nation? You could say my creativity, or my love for films, or even my strong supportive family. However, without all of three of these qualities, I am not complete. I am a puzzle, you need every single piece to complete it, missing even one leaves the puzzle unfinished.
I love films is a start of a new paragraph, sorry!
I love films, what really inspired me, and above all else, and what makes me unique are the beginnings of new paragraphs
Answer by Mr. Awesome
You think it sucks!?
I think it’s really good actually. I don’t know you of course so it’s tough to make a suggestion.Just make sure people you know read over it….. I like the style you made it in.
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