Question by cheezits101: Need help writing a scene?
I’m making a movie about two friends (boy and girl) for my film making class. In the movie, the boy tells the girl he LIKES her, but I’m not exactly sure how to write it….. So could you help?
Answer by Mini Movie Maker has a crush on Justin Bieber
Setting: Quiet, romantic, flowers,pond.
Girl: By herself and minding her on business.
From Distance zoom on boy: (facial expression – has idea) he walks to her.
Boy: Are you okay? You seem a little upset.
Girl: Oh Hi, yeah I suppose I am ok, just needed sometime to myself.
Boy: Oh, umm… do you need anyone to talk to?
Girl: (awkard) not really. no offence or anything, but I would really like to be by myself.
Boy: Oh. okay. im so..(girl inturrputs)
girl: oh, im sorry, its ok. you can stay.
BOTH SIT DOWN:
Boy: So, how are you going with your science assignment?
girl: im going alright, its a tad challenging though. how bout you?
boy: almost there.
QUIET. – BOY LOOKS AT HER SOFTLY.
GIRL IS LOOKING DOWN.
Boy: _____(her name goes there), I have been meaning to say this for a little while now (girl looks up to him)…I umm, I think your really sweet and I…I really like you.
GIRL: (JUST LOOKS AT HIM IN SHOCK)…..
i dont know what else you want. hope you like it and have fun and good luck. i want to come a filmmaker too.
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