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Question by Davood M: Please have a look at my resume for grammatical mistakes?
Hi, here is my resume but as English is not my mother tongue, I’m afraid I’ve made some grammatical mistakes. So i request you to help me rectify my mistakes, if there are any.
Also if you have any suggestions to make it better then i’d appreciate your help.
And if you are aware of any good website where i can find journalism jobs to apply for (especially photojournalism) then kindly let me know.
Thanks a lot.
Seyyed Davood Mousavi
Street no. 11,
Mob. : +919959643120 Mail ID: firstname.lastname@example.org
To be associated with a growth oriented, progressive company that gives me scope to update my knowledge as well as to use my skills and talent to prove the excellence in the industry.
Published a magazine “Balagh” in Azad University, Darab, Iran, from 2003-05. Worked as an Editor, Designer, Coordinator, Reporter and Writer.
Taught Photography and History of Cinema at Soreh Association of Islamic Arts and at the School of Arts and Culture, both situated in Mashhad, Iran between 2004 and 2006, then at Azad University, Darab, Iran, for two terms and for one term at Payam-E-Noor University.
Worked as the Director of Cultural Affairs at the Payam-e-Noor University, Darab, Iran, during 2003-‘04
M.A (M.C.J) 2008-`09. Osmania University, Hyderabad, India
M.A (B.C.J) 2007- ’08. Osmania University, Hyderabad, India.
B.A (History), 2001- ’04. Azad University, Darab, Iran.
Electronics, 1990- ’94. Chamran High school, Tehran, Iran.
Bashar Haq Middle school, 1987- ’90. Tehran, Iran.
Diploma in Photography, ’00, Young Film Makers Club of Iran, Mashad, Iran
EXTRA CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES
Exhibited my photographs in Osmania University, Hyderabad, India.
Participated in an Inter-collegiate photography competition held at Loyola Academy, Hyderabad, India.
Published photographs in various publication’s in Iran as well as in India.
Was a member of the Young Film Maker’s Club of Iran.
Exhibited my photographs in Azad University, Darab, Iran.
Was one of the organizers of the Cultural Festival of Darab, and coordinated the activities of
the department of Literature.
Was Head of the Committee for the establishment of the student’s branches of International
Committee for Red Crescent/Cross (ICRC) in Azad University, Agricultural University, and
Payam-e-Noor University in Darab during 2003-04.
Participated in various national events and worked as a camera person.
At ease and productive in high stress and fast-paced environments requiring skills in problem solving.
Adequate communication skills & team spirit requiring the ability to make independent decisions resulting in positive outcomes.
Dedicated & self-motivated
Excellent Leadership qualities
Ability to work in tight deadlines
Writing poetry, articles and short stories, Photography, Travelling, Reading books and Watching movies
Name : Seyyed Davood Mousavi
Father’s Name : Seyyed Abbas Mousavi
Permanent address : H.No:1-9-670,
Street no. 11,
Date of Birth : 08th December 1973
Nationality : Iranian
Marital Status : Single
Languages Known : Persian and English
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