Question by Sam: please help me revise this letter?
Well I’m 16 years old, and i am extremely passionate about making films, and there is this software that is $ 600 that i cannot afford. I hoped to e-mail the company so that maybe they could help me in some way, whether it be recommend a cheaper product, or maybe even lower the price if i were extremely lucky. Please tell me how I should revise the letter (I removed any company names, or product names)
To the administrators of (company name),
I am a 16 year old high school student. And I am extremely passionate about making films. I will be entering a filmmaking class soon, because I hope to one day become a cinematographer. I have been learning to use blender 3D, and some of the demo of Cinema 4D lately because I am going to also pursue some type of 3D animation in my future. I am a very low budget, and cannot really purchase any major software right now and your (product), which i have tried and really really like, I unfortunately cannot afford. I know that this would be a very very improbable question but, would it be possible in any way for you to give me a copy of (product). I would be inconceivably thankful if it were even possible to do this. I have no care if it were even an earlier version of it for OSX. I just wan’t to be able to make a film that I may enter into a film festival, and become more skilled with the application so that I can use it later on in my career, and become closer to following my dreams. Thank you ever so much.
Sincerely,
(My Name)
Best answer:
Answer by crazy9999
to much to read lol
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