Question by ▐▀▀▼▀▀▌ ► V.I.P ◄ ▐▄▄▲▄▄▌: Proof read my essay.?
hi can someone who has spare time proof read my essay and add/fix puncuation, grammer, spelling and or change words to sound better with higher vocab.
Pushing the envelope to a whole new level is always lingering my mind when I set foot to begin a new task. Ultimately when I am engaged in any activity I always push my self to the ultimate, to the edge of the cliff. You unlock new doors when forced. I, how ever still am on the verge to unravel and unchain one important door in my life.
I come from a pretty average family who has not had the opportunity to get the education they ever wished for. My mother born on a ranch in Mexico could not attend school due to transportation, and my father dropped out of school. I look back and I’m influenced to do my best to get the education they never strived for, to show who I am and what I can do. But the question: who am i? I see all my high school peers happy and content with their plans for their future.
I’m constantly bombarded with the question of my plans for my future. Ashamedly the answer is always “I don’t know yet”. I don’t know yet who I am I do how ever know what my passion is. The passion for film production and special effects. I didn’t always have this passion until about 4 years ago when I first started analyzing and watching others edit and develop their film online. The power of being in control. Your desires and expectations lye’s on your hands. I see media all around me and wonder why not me, humans design the media might as well be me. Since then iv always edited and played around with live footage.
It is hard to discover who you are and your future. You discover and embrace new things daily which subsequently changes your view or passion for something. that’s why I follow what I enjoy and eventually land where I need to be. Who I’m meant to be is behind the locked door and will remained locked for a longtime. After all isn’t that what life’s about, Finding who you are?
Answer by Beverly
however is one word. “and could not attend due to transportatioon”. u spelt llies wrong. u put lye’s. u puted iv. its I’ve.
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