Question by Yantong: Help~~~For correcting my ENGLISH resume?
Here is part of my resume. Would you please help to correct it?
December 2006 – June 2007 Intern in Sunward Intelligent Machinery Co., Ltd.
1.)Executed production management of intelligent equipments,
2.)Involved in new products development, such as structure design, control and motion analysis and validation;
3.)Conducted technical and documentary data management.
1.)Mastered Microsoft Office, AutoCAD, Pro-E, Visual Basic, MATLAB, PLC, MCU, etc,
2.)Good ability of practicing,
3.)Good knowledge of various systems of aircraft and Boeing and Airbus handbook.
4.)Leader of college football team and member of college basketball team.
Answer by Mu1
1) Managed production of intelligent equipment (note: “Equipment” plural does not use “s” at the end of the word)
2) Involved in development of new products…..
2) Good practical experience
3) good knowledge of various aircraft systems…….
otherwise, fine – good luck, hope you get the job!
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