Question by Jonathan Franco: Thriller Short Script Feedback?
I have to write a 3 page script for my production class. I had an idea for a short where two nature photographers go to develop their film and it develops out to be only pictures of them sleeping. Could be a cool short stalker flick. The only problem is that I don’t know how else to structure the film without making it cheesy and predictable.. power gets cut.. creepy phone calls.. etc. I’m thinking about abandoning the idea if this doesn’t work so any thoughts are helpful. I need some brain juice.
Answer by Jan C
Hey that’s sound like cool…. maybe in the end actually one of them is trying to get the other or something… Have you created the characters bible?
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